Gaining of Larruth
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Gaining of Larruth
Three travelers are on a mission, but only to learn and not challenge a problem they know is wrong with their world. There are however forces that believe the adventurers to be an immediate threat to their power base. Into the middle of this drama comes an innocent lad only seeking to court a lovely and interesting lady. What the young man does not realize is that the lady only exists because of an abuse of power that she is determined to stop.
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This book was written merely for my own interest in seeing if I could continue to follow the outline previously established for these characters. I was actually interested in Sylvia developing her personality and falling in love. Due to the romance, this book was a change for me that I welcomed.
Again I was amazed at how well what I wrote followed what I had said actually happened. I find the story enchanting on a number of levels, and usually read it very much pleased with it. It however also has the floating PoV of my early works, so needs to be redone. Maybe one day.
This book was published by PublishAmerica. They actually used my own art for the cover.
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This book was written merely for my own interest in seeing if I could continue to follow the outline previously established for these characters. I was actually interested in Sylvia developing her personality and falling in love. Due to the romance, this book was a change for me that I welcomed.
Again I was amazed at how well what I wrote followed what I had said actually happened. I find the story enchanting on a number of levels, and usually read it very much pleased with it. It however also has the floating PoV of my early works, so needs to be redone. Maybe one day.
This book was published by PublishAmerica. They actually used my own art for the cover.
Finally finished a good edit
It was hard determining the proper PoV at times, but I finished a good proper edit. The story continues to be solid, but now it is without the floating PoV. I worked hard to keep the manuscript from breaking between viewpoints, but there are a few places where there is a break after only a paragraph or two. All four characters are solid, and the opposition keeps its dominance as well. Pleased with it. Now to the final part of the trilogy.
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